A funnel introduction moves from relevant context towards the precise question and argument. The broad opening should still belong to the topic being assessed.
A practical starting point
Cut background that does not help the reader understand the thesis. End the introduction with a position and a route through the discussion.
Understand the task
An introduction gives the reader a route into the argument. Identify the subject, narrow it to the question being addressed and explain why that question matters. Background should prepare the reader for the task rather than become a separate history of the topic.
Develop the reasoning
State the purpose in concrete terms. Distinguish the main question from any supporting objectives and make the boundaries clear. A reader should be able to tell what the work will investigate and what it will leave outside its scope.
Use evidence carefully
Place the central claim or research aim where it can be found easily. Outline the sequence of the discussion without repeating the contents page. Explain the relationship between sections, rather than simply listing their titles.
Review the finished work
Return to the introduction after drafting the body. Check that the promise made at the beginning matches what the work actually delivers. Remove claims of importance that the evidence does not support and make terminology consistent.
Before you submit
- Check the brief and marking criteria for this task.
- Confirm the source and date of each factual claim.
- Review the argument before making the final language checks.
- Keep the final file and any submission confirmation.
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